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Post by iluvbarry on Oct 28, 2007 17:02:25 GMT -6
Here is my sample RP, please don't be too harsh!! I'm a newbie!! Blood splattered at high velocity from the neck arteries of Barry's latest victim and cascaded down a nearby wall. The headless body slumped to the ground and pumped out much of the remaining blood. Barry grinned broadly, his pupils shrinking as he swung his butcher knife repeatedly at the body, reducing it to a pile of tattered flesh, chipped bones and sludgy internal organs. is this too gory? please say it's ok, please!!!
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Post by AG on Oct 28, 2007 17:27:18 GMT -6
Works for me! It was actually good for being a newbie! Welcome to the RP!
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