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Post by kira on Apr 24, 2009 15:09:03 GMT -6
"X" had just gotten off the train and was now wondering the streets of central completely lost. He was looking for the state alchemist head quarters, but so far he had no luck people in the city were not and nice and polite as they were in the country.
After about a hour of wondering the streets of central. He started to get discouraged, and started to pull the hair out of his head. "OH MY GOD WERE IS IT??? " He yelled at the top of his lungs.
Gaining some side ways glances form the people walking by. A lady hurried her kids past the crazy acting boy. "Now kids that is what we call a crazy man I don't want to see you near his kind ok?" "yes ma ma. " The boy replayed and keep walking.
" HAY LADY I AM NOT CRAZY JUST LOST " he yelled he was becoming quite depressed. "Why cant i just find it they said it would be easy to find he sighed and started to walk again.
(( ok this is one of my longer ones it took me about 10to15 min if you want to see me replay like this plz don't rush me I do not do well under presser i can prolly knock out a good paragraph in five min give or take, but i have been picking up tips and constrictive criticism from people I rp with so if you have any tips plz tell me in ooc or privet message me them thanks again and I(I hope I can rp soon I will be on as much as I can and I hope to gain more tips to help me to become a better rper.(lol now that i look at it i think this part is longer then my post lol.) ))
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Post by masterwarlord on Apr 24, 2009 15:28:00 GMT -6
Yoki completed his bogus report as his train from Youswell arrived in central. He got off the train and dusted himself off, disgusted with how he'd had to sit so close to mere commoners. Yoki groomed his mustache slightly, then went off to look for the main building so that he could find Fuhrer Bradley.
Yoki looked around awhile, but was unable to find the place. He'd never actually been in Central until now. Central was very crowded and Yoki was annoyed at how often he had to rub shoulders with the peasants as he went through the streets of Central. Eventually, Yoki decided that this was taking far too long and sighed. He'd have to ask for directions from the -commoners- to find the place.
At this time, Yoki heard a man screaming out that he "wasn't crazy". If he wasn't crazy, why was he shouting like that? Pfft. Yoki continued listening to this and noticed that this strange individual was also lost. "Excuse me," said Yoki as he came up to "X", "but are you per chance lost? I'm also having a bit of trouble tracking down Fuhrer Bradley. I have urgent business to attendn to with him. Perhaps you could direct me to him and I could help you find wherever you're going? How's that for an equivalant exchange, hmm?". Yoki twitched slightly as he said this, forcing himself to sound friendly. He had to get to the Fuhrer as soon as possible.
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Post by kira on Apr 25, 2009 9:41:33 GMT -6
"x" was getting flustered, and then heard a voice asked him a question. He whipped around to see where the voice had come from. When he turned around he saw a man. Only a little taller then him. The man had to be some kind of higher up in this town to know the Fuhrer. After looking closer at the man he saw that he has a dark mustache that was well tended to.
"X" did not know how to address the man so he just blurted out. "Sorry i can not help i am new here and as well lost. This is my first time ever being this fare from my home town. It is worth it every thing is so beautiful, and it is so different from the places that i have seen." he said looking around for some one that may be able to help then.
Then saw a small boy about the age of fourteen, and then ran up to him and asked if her knew where the Fuhrer could be found. He then asked if he knew where the alchemist HQ could be found. after gathering some information he headed back to the man and told him. " it loos like were going to be travailing together for a bit were are going to the same place." he said smiling. oh ya i am Edward but people call me "X", and you are ?"
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Post by masterwarlord on Apr 25, 2009 11:26:54 GMT -6
Yoki sighed as “X” ran off to find information on his own. He figured that he’d abandoned him. Go figure. It was probably a waste of time to try to squeeze anything out of the commoners anyway. He’d be best off finding the Fuhrer on his own. Yoki started looking around, but didn’t travel too far from his initial spot. While his efforts were fruitless, eventually the young man from before came crawling back to him. . .Perhaps he was wiser then Yoki had initially thought. He recognized that he needed the help of the great Yoki!
Upon hearing what he had to say, Yoki forced a slight smile. He needed to find the Fuhrer as soon as possible and thus needed this man’s help. “I’m Yoki, erhem, good to meet you. Uhhh, “X”, was it?”. Yoki then stroked his mustache in thought for a moment, then spoke. “Pardon me, but where are –you- going exactly? Do you also have business with the Fuhrer?”. Yoki raised his eyebrow slightly and folded his arms, wondering how this person could possibly be important enough to see the Fuhrer. . .
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Post by kira on Apr 25, 2009 12:09:58 GMT -6
"who me see the fuhrer . Naw i am going to that state alchemist HQ TO see if i can cut it. If not then i will go home and train harder and then come back again and then try my luck again, but i don't plan not to cut it i have been training to hard to be sent away i know i have the power to get in. If not i have my Dad looking over me if all else fails. I will not let him down i will become a state alchemist." he said pulling on a grin.
"so what is the Fuhrer like is he as mean and scary as all the people say?" he asked and then started to walk to the HQ. still at aww at all the different buildings.
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Post by masterwarlord on Apr 25, 2009 12:57:44 GMT -6
Yoki listened intently to “X”, quickly following after him when he started to walk away. This young man was his only lead so far. “Oh, the Fuhrer’s quite nice. I’ve talked with him many times, he’s a good man, I assure you.” said Yoki, letting out a nervous chuckle. He’d never actually met the man before, but there was no need for X to know that.
“So the Fuhrer is at the State Alchemist Headquarters then, you say? Since you said we were both going to the same place. . .I’ve happened to already pass by the headquarters a few times while looking for the Fuhrer. I can’t believe I wasn’t informed that he was currently residing there. . .”. Yoki took the lead and started heading off for the State Alchemist Headquarters, leading X to it. This man had –better- be sure of the Fuhrer’s location. . .Otherwise Yoki would only be wasting all the more time.
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Post by kira on Apr 25, 2009 13:15:26 GMT -6
" well that is what i learned from that boy he said their is going to be some big party their and that the fuhrer was invited to be that guest of honer or some thing like that. " he said looking up at the sky and grinned. this was just what he needed to show his power off. He would make it rain and during the party and and then get noticed for his power and then be accepted as a state Alchemist.
" so id the Alchemist Headquarters far form here ?" he asked looking for any sings of a party.
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Post by masterwarlord on Apr 25, 2009 13:40:26 GMT -6
Yoki continued leading “X” to the headquarters. “Yes, we’re almost there.” said Yoki. He took a pause before remembering his “name”, muttering “X” afterwards.
So there was to be a party at the headquarters and the Fuhrer was to attend? This was all too perfect. This would be the perfect opportunity for Yoki to present his proposal to him while he was in a good mood. Plus, Yoki would get to attend a high class party where there wouldn’t be any commoners! Yoki chuckled to himself slightly. This was turning out to be a very fine day indeed.
Yoki arrived at the State Alchemist Headquarters with “X”. “Here we are, X. Good luck with your becoming a State Alchemist and all that.”. Yoki chuckled. . .”You’ll need it” he mumbled under his breath as he entered the building, quickly separating from X. It would be very unsightly if he were to be seen with a commoner here. It’d possible he wouldn’t even be let in! After quickly separating from “X”, Yoki went through the party and began scanning through those present to try to find the Fuhrer. . .
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Post by kira on Apr 26, 2009 13:45:22 GMT -6
"X" had gotten the hint and went his own way only to go to the front office, and find out that every one was at the party. If their was any hope for hem to show off his skills he would have to do it at the party.
"X" ran towards the party and then looked out the window and saw a huge court yard this was the court yard that they held the assassinations. "wow i never thought it would be this big and all the people wow this might not be as easy as i thought it would be." He said slipping on his gloves and got ready to show off his skills.
So "X" made his way down to the court yard only to find out that their was guards guarding the way in to the yard. "Great how am i going to get in their now. Wait what am i saying i am an alchemist i will just make a door." he chuckled and walked to the wall and made a door and walked in to be surrounded with people .
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Post by masterwarlord on May 4, 2009 0:21:46 GMT -6
((Sorry about my long absence. I was hoping Pride would show up.))
Yoki continued to search about for the Fuhrer, but to no avail. It didn’t seem that he was present. Yoki Figured as much. A random peasant such as that “X” fellow was not to be taken seriously. Why did he even believe him in the first place? Yoki considered going to leave to continue his search for the Fuhrer, but decided that he’d already done enough work for the day and that he should just relax and enjoy the party. After all, most of the people here were high class, though of course not on Yoki’s level. Still, it was hard to be on Yoki’s supreme level of nobility, and Yoki had nothing but common peasants to talk with recently. He went over and got a drink and started talking with some of the other party-goers.
Suddenly, “X” interrupted the conversation as he came in through the wall next to him. He stepped back hastily and let out somewhat frantically “How did somebody like you get in here?!”. After a pause, Yoki sighed. “Right, you’re here about becoming a State Alchemist, if I recall. This party was getting rather boring. I suppose we –could- use some entertainment. Show us what you can do, “X”.”.
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Post by kira on May 4, 2009 21:11:19 GMT -6
once "X" had gotten into the party he had began to wounder a round. he was about to give up when he saw Yoki, and then he heard what the man had said. A huge grin spread across his face. He knew it was his time to shine. to he reached in to his pocket and pulled out a small battery, and some wire it had a small transmutation circle on the bottom of the battery.
" ok Sir I am ready I am going to have to ask you to clear a spot for me. I do not want any one to get hurt wile i am doing this." The only reason he had the battery was to make an eclectic spark. So that he could use that spark to do his will. Once he had charged the air with electricity he would be able to do grander tricks, but he would have to start with smaller tricks first it was his plan. All he had to do now was wait for a clearing so that he could start.
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Post by masterwarlord on May 5, 2009 11:54:45 GMT -6
The higher ranked officer Yoki was talking to before "X" came over raised an eyebrow. "You know this man?". Yoki, not yet sure whether it would be good or bad to associate himself with "X" due to not yet seeing his skills, twiddled his thumbs about, wondering what to say. After a pause, he decided to go for a compromise, actually telling the truth. "He's. . .An aqquantice. I know just as much about him as you do. Either way, you do agree the party could use some more livening up, don't you?". The superior officer shrugged his shoulders. "True. . .Even if he fails, it could still be looked on as a comedy act.". Yoki chuckled at this. "Oh ho ho, I like how you think!".
After having given it some thought, Yoki and the other officer made some room for "X", right in the center of the party. Yoki rubbed his hands together eagerly. He was ready to change his relation to "X" from aqquantice to best friend should he prove to be a good alchemist.
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Post by sweetanimefreak2xd on May 6, 2009 9:46:26 GMT -6
"AHHHHHHHHH... I am feeling lonely....Damn where i am???" Rose shouted exhausted...*mumbel mumbel*..."Ah... i'm so hungry..."...Than Rose saw a little diner (i hope its right ^^")...She ran toward it and bought something...."Eventual", thought Roses relieved...At dinner she looked around her...."Mhm Centrel is so big  ....Surly I can't find them here  ..... oh man..." In a bad tempered she went forward in a forest of houses..... ( I hope it is ok, if i write this here ^^") |
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Post by masterwarlord on May 7, 2009 12:15:56 GMT -6
((Be my guest, Rose. Although if you wanna actually interact with us you'd have to come to the party.))
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Post by sweetanimefreak2xd on May 9, 2009 8:31:55 GMT -6
(Thanks ^^)
Roses walked the street until she heard a noise somewhere..."What is this??"..... She went to the noises. Than she saw that the noises came from a party.....( I don't know if the party is in or outside ^^"...) Rose went in and saw people laughing and speaking.....
( I hope it's ok ^^"...)
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Post by masterwarlord on May 25, 2009 13:57:33 GMT -6
((Alright, so X has left us, it seems. I'll move him out and RP with you for a bit, Rose. The party is indeed indoors FYI. Sorry for the long wait, hope it didn't scare you off.))
After finishing making the clearing in the center of the party, he looked back to try to see where "X" was, but he was nowhere in sight, gone without a trace. Yoki called out his "name" a few times, but he was nowhere to be found. Yoki scowled in frustration at this, but the superior officer who had helped Yoki make the clearing for "X" came up to him with his arms folded and said "Where'd he go? He was your responsibility. These people expect some entertainment.". Yoki forced a smile and chuckled nervously. “I didn’t know him all that well, he was just an acquaintance. I just thought the party was boring and decided to take a chance. Excuse my bad taste in alchemists. . .”. The high ranking officer was completely unfazed. “I can’t have done this for nothing. You’ll have to come up with an act, and fast. The show must go on.”.
Yoki’s eye twitched violently at this proposition. He wasn’t an entertainer by any stretch of the imagination. . .What could he possibly come up with on the spot? Upon taking a few moments to think, Yoki deemed the idea foolish, but got a far better one. While the fuhrer wasn’t here, he could present his paperwork to the high class people here about the ridiculous situation in Youswell and why he was the right man to be given more power. Yes. . .He had a captive audience. This was the perfect opportunity.
Yoki chuckled to himself as he entered the clearing among the people and took out some papers from his briefcase and began reading them aloud, though in just a couple minutes, a stray tomato was flung at him with a man yelling out “Where’s the main act?!? I’m getting’ bored to tears over here!”. Yoki’s eye twitched some more as he wiped off the tomato and said “This is far more important than any mere entertainment. This is-“, but he was interrupted as another tomato was thrown at him and another man spoke up. “A load of crap. None of the stupid things you’ve said are true!”. Yoki began fuming and tried to protest, but a flurry of tomatoes were thrown at him. Yoki quickly packed his papers back into his briefcase and ran out of the party in a panic from the tomatoes, passing by a girl at the entrance who wasn’t let in due to her low class status. Yoki began wiping off the tomatoes as he mumbled “Damn impatient fools. . .No taste.” under his breath.
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Post by sweetanimefreak2xd on May 31, 2009 11:18:21 GMT -6
Rose cringed when she heard a loud scream. She saw a man who was pelted with tomatoes. " Poore man.. i'll help him.." But actually she hadn't a idea how she could help him so Rose ran after him.....
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Post by masterwarlord on Jun 1, 2009 9:48:43 GMT -6
Yoki turned to the woman coming after him, raising an eyebrow. “I suppose you’ve come to laugh at me too?” said the military con man as he wiped off some tomatoes from his uniform, mumbling under his breath. He looked the girl over briefly to see her social status. . .She seemed to be but a commoner. This could’ve very easily been interpreted as a much more blatant, unwanted looking over of the girl, though Yoki wasn’t thinking about that.
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Post by sweetanimefreak2xd on Jun 1, 2009 13:41:24 GMT -6
" No.... I want to help you..... Can we turn into the allay... and you..." but Rose was to exhausted to read along. Normally it won't be a problem to ran this short distance ... but from Lior to Central was a long way and she hadn't had rest until now......
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Post by masterwarlord on Jun 1, 2009 14:53:12 GMT -6
Yoki raised an eyebrow. “Help me, you say? And how do you intend to-“ but Yoki stopped mid-sentence as he saw that the girl needed help more then he did, appearing quite tired. “Are you feeling alright, miss?” Yoki asked. He didn’t particularly want help himself as it would only hurt his ego which had already taken a big hit from the recent incident, but he did feel a need to return the favor to the girl after she so openly offered it to him.
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..... oh man..." In a bad tempered she went forward in a forest of houses.....
