Zohi: Dragon Fist

[Hoenheim Of Light [Zohi]]

Alias: Demon Monk/Dragon Fist
Name:Zohi Tensho Renbai
Age:55?
Gender: Male
Weight:210 Lbs
Height:6'3"
Hair: bald and with a white ponytail
Eyes:beep blue
Personality: Zohi is usually very stoic, but can be emotional if the emotion is powerful enough. His anger can usually be soothed by drinking sake, or fighting, or both. He is a monk by trade, meaning he has a very devout relationship with is god, and is passionately loyal to his friends. He had two children that died due to illnesses after birth, and his wife passed away due to difficulties in her childbirth.

Physical Description: Zohi carries himself with an outward and inward respect. he holds his head high and walks with a powerful gait. his muscle are a prominent feature that anyone would notice, but his most noticeable features are the sharp piercing eyes. he usually appears angry due to his stoic nature. He wears the customary monks apparel and carries several leather bags at his waist which contain various weapons, like throwing powders and and also money. he has a sword strapped to his side but rarly draws it.

History: Zohi was born in Southwest Amestris to a father who was a Monk of the god of chaos, Demgai. his father was a renowned fighter in his town and was also a drunk of unparalleled ability. Zohi's father created a style of fighting called the "drunken dragon" that utilizes alchemy and martial arts to cause devastating damage to his opponents. his father did not teach this art to Zohi through traditional means, but rather the "survive this day of training and you can eat tomorrow" method as well as coming home and going on a rampage.
Zohi took this art to a new level making it even more deadly calling it "the dancing dragon". this martial art showed evidence of the drunken dragon style, but also had its own flavor of elegance. Zohi has taken assassination contracts and bodyguard missions and thinks nothing of killing the people who harm innocents.

Other: Zohi's Alchemy is lightening based, utilizing one array on the blade of his sword. the array takes up most of the blade so if the blade brakes he will more than likely be without alchemy unless he draws the array on another object.


--SAMPLE ROLEPLAY--

The sound of thunder echoed through the valley as Zohi fought desperately with his father. the sun was setting and they had been fighting since dawn. a savage kick to the knee almost broke his leg, but zohi used the force to spin his body around and thrust his dummy sword into his fathers face, breaking his nose in the process. zohi knew that hesitation was the fools path to the grave, so he grabbed a handful of his fathers hair and and slammed a knee into his face, further crushing his father nose. his father laughed, spraying him with blood. zohi was grabbed from behind a thrown face first into a rock, but rolled on his shoulder to take most of the force and stood up... only to be kicked directly in the face. staggering backward he couldn't see and was sure his nose was broken, he started throwing viscous attacks and didn't stop for almost five minutes. when his vision cleared he realized that he had been fighting air... his father was passed out on the ground, drunk...

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[Father [Azerik]]

Saying his Alchemy is fire based is a bit vague. There's several ways one can make fire with Alchemy, I'd approve this if you explained what he does to make fire. If you need help, ask me, and I can even make a Transmutation Circle for you.

[Hoenheim Of Light [Zohi]]

edited

[Father [Azerik]]

Perhaps it would be better if you chose one way of making fire, as opposed to several? Regardless, the explanations is satisfactory so my approval is given.

1/3

[Roy Mustang [Riley Ledon]]

I would have to say no for now, but only because of AG's Rules.

1. Your OC must have flaws
Emotional, and tries to cure through drinking
Good

2. Your OC must not be a Homunculus
Human
Good

3. Your OC may be in love with a canon character, but you may not say the feelings are mutual
Good

4. An OC cannot be related to a canon character.
Good

5. No Video Game Canons.
Don't Think So
Good

6. Your OC must use an array to perform alchemy, but feel free to be creative. THIS MEANS YOU CAN NOT HAVE SEEN THE GATE!
Arrays On Body
Good

7. You may play a canon in addition to your OC (people who are already playing canons must keep their current character as a temp or a second permanent character. If you fail to play that character then your OC will be taken away.)
Good

8. In order to be accepted, your OC must be approved by THREE of the FIVE staff members.
Not Yet

9. All weapons and powers must fit into the FullMetal Alchemist world. No demonic powers nor any special weapons (e.g. Inuyasha's Tetsusaiga)
Good

10. Your character may have arrays tattooed on their body, but it may only be on one part of the body (i.e. hands, feet, one arm, one leg, etc.)
Both Hands And Feet
Not Approved

11. All alchemy powers must be original. No copying canon character powers (e.g. only Scar can blow people's brains up and only Kimblee can turn people into bombs)
Sorry... but Roy?
Not Approved

12. The military may have swords. However, when on duty, they may not use their swords. They must use military weaponry.
Good

13. Alchemy MUST be with a physical element and must fit within alchemy laws. (I didn't think I had to put this since everyone has seen the show and it's a rule of the show)
Good

[Hoenheim Of Light [Zohi]]

edited.

[Father [Azerik]]

Affine, I'm going to once again argue with you, please forgive me.

While Mustang does indeed use fire, the reaction he uses to get fire is entirely different from what Arythe had for Zohi. Zohi's (former) Alchemy involves chemical fires, which are altogether more deadly and entirely different from the fire Mustang uses, which is only burning hydrogen in the air, and using Oxygen to increase the heat. Aside from that, something like causing fire is hardly considered unique, as it can be done even without alchemy, where as turning miscellaneous objects into bombs, and blowing people's brains up from the inside is unique to the characters' frame of mind and absolutely requires alchemy to happen. Ed could just as easily make fire with Alchemy, should he choose to do so, what is unique about Mustang's Alchemy, is the use he puts it to, and the relative simplicity of the reactions involved.

And thus concludes today's episode of "Azerik rants about Alchemy"

[Hoenheim Of Light [Zohi]]

*clap clap clap* to bad, though i here they are gonna cancel it soon...

[Father [Azerik]]

It is D:?

[Roy Mustang [Riley Ledon]]

>___< Okay, yes again you are right.

I approve of this revised version. 2/3

[AG]

You're good 3/3

[Father [Azerik]]

If I wasn't camera shy, I'd be doing my own nerdy web series of which the theme would be variable in each episode XD

Seriously, though one of the reasons I applied to be a mod if because of this. My knowledge of Alchemy comes in handy dun it?

[AG]

You are to be envied XD