Post by kira on Feb 5, 2009 0:11:07 GMT -6
(( this is "X's" new intro the only reason i am doing this is because the site started over and i never really got to rp with him so plz enjoy))
"X" had just gotten off the train and was now wondering the streets of central completely lost. He was looking for the state alchemist head quarters, but so far he had no luck people in the city were not and nice and polite as they were in the country.
After about a hour of wondering the streets of central. He started to get discouraged, and started to pull the hair out of his head. "OH MY GOD WERE IS IT??? " He yelled at the top of his lungs.
Gaining some side ways glances form the people walking by. A lady hurried her kids past the crazy acting boy. "Now kids that is what we call a crazy man I don't want to see you near his kind ok?" "yes ma ma. " The boy replayed and keep walking.
" HAY LADY I AM NOT CRAZY JUST LOST " he yelled he was becoming quite depressed. "Why cant i just find it they said it would be easy to find he sighed and started to walk again.
(( ok this is one of my longer ones it took me about 10to15 min if you want to see me replay like this plz don't rush me I do not do well under presser i can prolly knock out a good paragraph in five min give or take, but i have been picking up tips and constrictive criticism from people I rp with so if you have any tips plz tell me in ooc or privet message me them thanks again and I(I hope I can rp soon I will be on as much as I can and I hope to gain more tips to help me to become a better rper.(lol now that i look at it i think this part is longer then my post lol.) ))
"X" had just gotten off the train and was now wondering the streets of central completely lost. He was looking for the state alchemist head quarters, but so far he had no luck people in the city were not and nice and polite as they were in the country.
After about a hour of wondering the streets of central. He started to get discouraged, and started to pull the hair out of his head. "OH MY GOD WERE IS IT??? " He yelled at the top of his lungs.
Gaining some side ways glances form the people walking by. A lady hurried her kids past the crazy acting boy. "Now kids that is what we call a crazy man I don't want to see you near his kind ok?" "yes ma ma. " The boy replayed and keep walking.
" HAY LADY I AM NOT CRAZY JUST LOST " he yelled he was becoming quite depressed. "Why cant i just find it they said it would be easy to find he sighed and started to walk again.
(( ok this is one of my longer ones it took me about 10to15 min if you want to see me replay like this plz don't rush me I do not do well under presser i can prolly knock out a good paragraph in five min give or take, but i have been picking up tips and constrictive criticism from people I rp with so if you have any tips plz tell me in ooc or privet message me them thanks again and I(I hope I can rp soon I will be on as much as I can and I hope to gain more tips to help me to become a better rper.(lol now that i look at it i think this part is longer then my post lol.) ))
